Hi, there, love this and recognize the pattern of the way things run, to me it mostly starts with a trickle out of a mind freeze and a kick start by my wife, but still... Well written in a great flow
I sense a feeling of uncertainty and sense a feeling of miss direction
correct me if I am wrong it's a good write a good poem just like
to add my input
I don't know if you believe in God but I sense a longing for a reason
to journey on Linda
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Hi, there, love this and recognize the pattern of the way things run, to me it mostly starts with a trickle out of a mind freeze and a kick start by my wife, but still... Well written in a great flow
Excellent write Rob x
I sense a feeling of uncertainty and sense a feeling of miss direction
correct me if I am wrong it's a good write a good poem just like
to add my input
I don't know if you believe in God but I sense a longing for a reason
to journey on Linda