Torture chambers

These mountains are torture chambers
Torture,
Within the crevice
Hanging by this rope, dangle
Surrounded by the buzzards
Slap does not work here
In this chamber
In this little alley
Within this larger alley
In which you hang
In the sun,
If only the sun would go away
It is in my eyes now
Blinding my vision
Here in the mountains
The torture begins
First the blinding sun
Then the buzzards
Blood from the palms
Red rock sweat
Where the falling began
Down
Down
Down
Into the deepest,
The darkest
The deepest darkest place
Of the mountains west
There is no human life left here
These mountains are torture chambers
The dead, the countless dead
The suffering; for these damn flies,
This vision blinded by the sun
The countless dead have known before
Yet; this place is so beautiful
These mountains are God's place, it is hard to believe
That this crevice through which I fell
And died
One morning
Looking out
Into the mountains west
These mountains are torture chambers
Torture chambers
Torture chambers
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Comments
Brilliant and super stark ,,,,,loved it
Thank you for reading my poem
and your good comments are
appreciated for the poem I found
a bit challenging.
Kind regards Jai:)
felt as tho was on that Mountain
I try to make effect
words are limiting though
feelings are the more powerful,
thank you Mark for explaining
the feeling;
best wishes Jai:)