Poem -
Tragedy Beyond
In my nights I wander aimlessly
Despair I keep and stay
It's kept me in my sorrows
As I keep the hounds at bay
Clandestine is this fraction
Of myself in hate becomes
Of predecessor kindess
Now malignant little hums
I welcome silent voices now
I know their meaning well
From every crack and crevice
Know that we create our hell
I'm sure that I'd be mad
To say I know I'm not insane
Where ignorance is bliss
To know I'm mad is quite the gain
And yet the world is ever full of eyes
And lacking sight
It leaves a gaping hole
On every aimless wandered night
And leaves the heart a ruin
For this soul that carries on
From bitter end to bitter end
And tragedy beyond
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What a deep and innovative write, it's a style of wording things I've never seen before and all while rhyming. It's funny but it makes a lot of sense to me, bravo my friend.
What a great compliment, thank you and much love!
CO
And leaves the heart a ruin
For this soul that carries on
From bitter end to bitter end
And tragedy beyond
I hate to say it but your worst, saddest most depressing writes somehow have a way of being some of the best yet, 4\5 carry on brother!
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I agree it, I have more "oh that's the one" moments with my darker more gothic poems though I'm not really goth lol it just sounds more interesting, out of the ordinary in such a world of exhausting cliches. Thanks for the love, stay curious :)
Curious
"Be his voice alone, he will love himself" I love that quote and I love this poem. I think it's relevant. You think in an abstract way, I'd love to pick your brain some day.
I love that quote too! Definitely feel free to message me anytime
CO
In the midst of a sea of cliché' ideologies & expressions...... the quiet poet's words.....ring the bell ' loudly'!! .......so happy to see you on the pages brother poet!!...... tons-O-stars!!...... Kings to you!!...... LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ?✳✴♥?♥??
Words that keep the lantern working. It's great to see you as well and I'm trying to come back more and more but I'll be brutally honest and say "the sea of cliché has kept me away" haha well that and the occasional writers block, but I never forget to come back for old friends and a few of my favorite modern poets. Much love brother!
Your friend
Curious Onlooker
Hello CO...
You know I enjoy your writes and I enjoy sharing your Journey thanks for sharing...
Great write my friend!
Glad to see you!
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Hugs...
sparrowsong
Hey Sparrow! It's always a pleasure and nothing less than a delight to see you stop by to say hello, thank you so much, I had to smile. :)
Your friend
Curious Onlooker