Poem -
Transformation
Come dance with me
Through evergreensÂ
Where nature sings of broken dreams
Where flesh meets boneÂ
And fire ignitesÂ
The centrifuge to earths true lightÂ
Come lay with meÂ
Between the bladesÂ
Of this green land
Which no man madeÂ
Where dreams do not elude the mindÂ
But rather shape those thoughts you find
And bind them to your fruitful soulÂ
Where truth repairsÂ
What man has stoleÂ
To bask yourself in celestial wavesÂ
That take you far beyond the graveÂ
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Comments
OMG Gwen...absolutely love this...your best in my opinion. You have really captured an essence of lands out of time or place where everything can be exactly as it should be...it's terrifically sad and unbelievably beautiful....you have truly captured an atmosphere of great love here ...hugs đđ§Ąâ¤ď¸
Oh wow Marion, I couldnât ask for a better reaction â¤ď¸ Thank you ever so much my lovely friend. Sending love and hugs back at you đxxxxx
OMG I absolutely totally dam well love this just like Marion!!! n equally adore that picture my lovely Gwendoline lass u r a âď¸â¤ď¸đâ¤ď¸đš
Wowsers thank you my lovely poetic friend đ so thrilled you loved this :) xx â¤ď¸đš
Oh I do tis totally sheer brilliance â¤ď¸đâ¤ď¸
â¤ď¸đ thank you so much xxxx
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Very well done Gwen. Youâve got a beautiful  style.
JP
Awe thank you John, that is a huge compliment regarding my writing :) xÂ
Gwen, beautifully imagined and projected too a poem of substance by a poet and woman of substance on top of her game.
What more can one say except perhaps the words thank you.
Thank you for sharing your poetry gift and forever remain poetry blessed and enriched my friend.â¤ď¸
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Awe Shaun you are always so kind and supportive. Thank you for your lovely words and kind heart to this piece, and my poetry in general. Happy writing my good friend, I will be off to read more of your work soonÂ
Your friendÂ
Gwen x :)Â
Thanks for sharing Gwendoline.
What a kool read.
I follow the others.. Liked! Pinned!
Wow thank you ever so much Wilford, I look forward to reading more of your lovely work. Many many thanks for the kind words and the pin on this poem :)Â
My dear poet sister GWEN!! (So glad I found this write)
If in finding the right words for this unbelievably intuitive and poetically ASTONISHING poem....you stumbled upon the heart of a world that exists beyond the fringe....and has the kind of light that you and Depeche Mode (apparently) have encountered....I would appreciate, more than kindly, your allowing me to accompany you there for a moment or two.....just a taste of it would probably fill me up forever (in realistic terms)....smiles!......this is an amazing piece of work my friend!!......I think most of the comments above give you an inkling as to how truly profound I believe this piece to be!!.....Your work just keeps getting better and better.....so proud of you....and so happy that you are a part of the family here....your words truly inspire!!......PINNED!!.....well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo : )
Wow thank you Tony for your time and wonderful words on this here poem. I did write it whilst listening to the DM song âStrippedâÂ
And of course we can take a little stroll down there together
my good friend :)Â
Thank you for always being so supportive and kindÂ
Your ever grateful friendÂ
Gwen xÂ
wow what wonderful poemÂ
Awe thank you for checking this one out greg. So grateful for your kind words on my poem xÂ
sorry I almost missed this one Gwen! it has got great reviews because it is great! another classic write from a classy poetess and lady! One can only write spiritual things, if one is in tune with the Spirit, and few are these days! thank you for sharing your beautiful talent!.......................................................................Jim
Jim, your words are so beautiful and truly worth cherishing. Thank you for leaving such a lovely message. I feel humbled and so very gratefulÂ
Gwen xÂ
Very well spoken I love this one!!
Hello Jeff, thank you ever so much for taking a look back at my work. I am so chuffed you liked this one. Many thanks for your kind wordsÂ
Gwen :)
I double dare anyone, who follows me here to try and leave this page without leaving a little bit of themselves behind ..Â
This is what we here in Somerset are inclined to call poetry with a big P :) x
Wow Neville, many thanks for such kind and generous feedback. Always such a pleasureÂ
Gwen x
it certainly is mine, I can tell ya :) x