Trouble
Are you in trouble , does it follow you around . Are you troubled , does life bring you down . Is it your middle name can you get out of it , , does it haunt people you know . ? . Troubled age groups , midlife crisis , teenage anckst . He was troubled as a young man . Tip toe around trouble , try and slap it away from others . Make sure it's never with the law . Troubling the state of the planet . Are we all in serious trouble , not just the things but the creation of forever past . Does all this pollution put us all down . Run screaming troubled , interrupted air ways . Are the people you have as a crowd going to bring trouble to your door . Is the funist memory's the naughtest time you got in trouble , got others in trouble , have it as a tale now . A badge , a tattoo covered . A curse . Trouble flee , the kind that displeases me . Troubling times are ahead if the so called good book is right . Iets not go out to make trouble , anarchy .
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What a curiously compelling piece of abstract poetry.....I am still wearing my thinking cap over here.... it doesn't normally take me much effort to decipher meaning or intent..... but I must say....... the fact that you put an 'abstract' label on this piece has left me a bit baffled......I wish you'd clear this up for me... or it will drive me crazy 'til I do figure it out!!........ Thank you in advance......I am your cyber-friend and admirer!!........T xo. : )
Hi Tony read it now it's finished . Hope you like it .
Woah what a fine metaphoric creative fantastic poem on life's issues and troubles. I like ho you repeated trouble like a refrain. Kudos.
pls pleez do comment/give your thoughts under my newest poem too
Ah!! LILIANA!!.... you've certainly knocked it out of the park...... Love the Biblical reference toward the end...... makes for quite the impactful phrasing and clarity........ great work my friend!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo. : )
Hello friend Tony . Thank you very much for the out of the park comment. Very very flattered . Hope I get to see you one day .