True Friend

A true friend is someone who understands your tears,
Someone who stays by your side for years
A true friend doesn't give you a friendship band,
But walks through your difficulties hand in hand
A true friend sees the pain in your eyes,
Goofing with him time flies
A true friend helps you through your toughest times,
And won't leave you even for a million dimes
A true friend treats you like his own brother,
And cares for you like none other
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Your poem demonstrates excellent command of diction and syntax. Just work a bit on imagery and you'll be perfect in no time.
Can you elaborate as to how I need to work on my imagery?
Write more descriptive descriptions containing rich, engrossing details. This helps one visualize your content and creates similar snapshots in the reader's mind.Â
Lovely words, true to the soul.
Thanks :)