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True Picture

True Picture

Art or Science
Which to choose?
No one can tell you
It's all up to you
Choose creativity or theories?
Choose freedom or boundaries?
Choose pictures or symbols?
Choose expression or equations?
Whichever way you go
You should know
There is no right or wrong
Both an enigma
Both create possibilities
Both extraordinary
It’s how you see it
That changes your view
Creativity flows
In atoms of Art and Science too
Look beyond the textures
Look beyond the surface
See the opposites
Like in a spectrum
The beauty in both
Will surprise you all
There is
Freedom
Creativity
And expression in both
See it from a quantum level
And you can never disagree
How colourful
The picture is
That you will truly see

 

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Sarfraz Ahmed

Pratibha another amazing poem, this is good. I like the questioning throughout. Great use of imagery.  Well done! 

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Pratibha Savani

Glad you liked it. It's not like the traditional verse poems. I have put questions in my writing in the past or done explanations too. Thanks for like star and pin ?

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Pratibha Savani

Thanks Simon for like and stars ?. Wasnt sure if anyone would like it!! 

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Pratibha Savani

Glad you like the read. I actually chose art. Not science. But definitely liked science more as an adult!!

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Katina Woodruff...

Very interesting the way that you compared, Art and Science. 

Favorite lines 

Choose creativity or theories?
Choose freedom or boundaries?
Choose pictures or symbols?
Choose expression or equations?

If you love science and art, a Bachelor Degree in English, may be the right path to take in college. 

If you are good in math, you can be good in any subject. 

Good work.

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Pratibha Savani

Hi Katrina. Thank you for your comments! most appreciative that you liked my comparison ?
I'm from an art background. Science grew as an adult cos I always loved learning about the universe xxx

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Marion

This is so clever and so deep and actually very complex Pratibha, you have a wonderful mind...how did I miss so much if your stuff?? Hugs ?

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Pratibha Savani

Oh wow thank you for the huge compliment! I really started to understand and enjoy physics as a grown up watching xmas lecturers and love anything to do with the universe. I come from an art background but love science its equally beautiful and had to convey the 2 opposites that werent so dis similar after all. 
Really appreciate your support of my writing especially this one. Much love ? Px

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Marion

I too love anything to do with the universe but I can't get my head around physics! Its a language I don't speak?love are though, I paint a bit, you're welcome ?

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Being Me

How did I miss this!?  Did you know, maths has a part to play in composing a successful painting? It's all done with squares apparently. There's a well known formula that artists use. It is called the rule of something or other. Really!  It is actually a thing! Now, I am not good at anything mathematical... In fact I am bloody useless at it... But I do understand that it has its own beauty (and very much so) but, apart from that, it all goes whooshing right over my head.

I love the uniqueness of this write. Wonderful work, P ? x

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Pratibha Savani

Wow thank you Tina! Glad you liked this one. 
Maybe is called the rule of thumb? Will need to google!!
The thing is I enjoyed science more as an adult. Coming from an art background...I actually loved it that maths and usually science had a right answer and art was the complete opposite. I'm so logical in things I do yet I like being creative. Total opposites like in this piece and wanted to convey how they were but also how much similarities there were. Both extraordinary subjects that actually compliment each other in the natural order. It's amazing.
Thank you for enjoying it and the pinned! 
And this is my usual freestyle writes, before I knew it was called prose!!
Px ?? 
 

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