Poem -
Tumbling Thoughts
Gently falling flowers
worn wilted words
hectic hollow space
Time torn and tattered
Blacktop heart stop pawnshop
Such a lonely place
Used up chewed up
Life wont let me go
Don't try so hard to know me
Come down sundown shadows
Dancing in my eyes
What truth do you have to show me
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Comments
YES!! TWILLA!!...I love it!!...... your words tumble to the timing of heartbeats here.... an excellent display of the rhythmical possibilities within the abstract arena...... that somehow, above itself, make perfect sense to the reader.....I love it when a writer messes around with original phrasing..... almost like an instant pantomime if you will!!.......ALL STARS!!..... VERY cool girlfriend!!.... LOVE and ROCKETS!!.....T xo ??✴✴❤❤✴✴?
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someone grab my ego before it breaks the ceiling! Thank You so much Tony. I have a few of the rapidly flowing word poems, most untitled. I love when the words come like that. Just spilling out of my head faster than I can get them down. Thank You so much for your support!