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Twisted script

Twisted script

I was lifted from my hell you locked me in, your twisted script constricted my oxygen , you admitted the list of pain to inflict within, the self loathing I became addicted overdosing I kept injecting it in a sudden release before I commit to the deceased, of my sins I am acquitted

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Tony Taylor

Hey GRYFFYN!!.......I REALLY like the way you used the Short "i" sound running throughout this piece of well considered poetic prose......Not only is it a clever tool that you've employed here but it adds greatly to the continuity of the whole!!......I DO, however, believe it would be even MORE powerful if you formatted it differently!!......Regardless, a fine debut' piece dear poet brother!!.......ALL STARS!!......well done.....and......WELCOME to COSMO!!........LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo ?✴❤

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