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Reflections

Reflections

It stands before me quizzical,
Satire enshrouds and quip,
Its eyes reading my aura,
Deplore of my recent endeavours,
Doused in naked flames, it holds me in its grip.
 
It moves to my every rhythm,
Fabricates and masks in attempt to ascertain,
Eclipsed only in shadow,
It returns as I do, see through and vain.
 
Obscured in pain and devilry,
Incessant truth lingers midst the eyes,
Mutilated outlook on inner depth,
No matter how hard I try,
I cannot disguise.

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Ian William

I love the duality and quest for identity within this piece!

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Simon Bromley

Thank you ian i may rewrite this as was hoping for better response but that's what experimenting is all about.

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Ian William

I have very few votes or comments for the first 4 months of poems I posted and I consider them to be at par with any other since. I wouldn't rely on the response of others to measure the quality of your work, I don't. Plus, this poem is brilliantly measured in rhythm and cadence!

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Simon Bromley

Thank you Ian your advice means alot.  I agree.

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Edward Williams

I often concider rewriting but I find when i rewrite for more people to understand it or fell a connection or whatever reason you loose somthing in peice that was meant to be there and it ends up not being the same poem  
I love this Simon great work

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Simon Bromley

Thank you Edward for your advice and support too.

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