Poem -
Uncaged Heart
Life created in me
A caged heart wanting to be free
Free from life's miseries
Things you could never dream
Keeping parts of my being
Under lock and key
Lost in past times
Lust, pain, love, sufferings
Takes time to see
Life is a endless mystery
Striving to keep my heart
So I can join the world
And live burden free
With a heart flying above the trees
Where we all wish we could be
With creatures that have wings
Mysteries and beauties
Only a uncaged heart can see
A uncaged heart
Is free to believe
Dreams unlocked
Visions seen
Uncaged heart
Broken free
A uncaged heart beating inside of me....
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wonderful write "an uncaged heart beating insideΒ me" that is such a powerful message! well written piece
Thank you so much..
Ive taken the opertunity Terry being back on site to have a read of your poems and just read Uncaged Heart such a powerful but beautiful write I absolutely love the poem hasΒ become one of my favorites bless you my friendΒ
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Thank you my friend.Β Love. Terry Kay
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My Dear Terry,
What a beautiful poem you have written, dealing with setting one's heart free.
The Heart is a lonely hunter
Until finally uncaged
Then free to find its true love
Its loneliness assuagedΒ
Love,
Larry xxx
Dear Larry I don't know how I missed your vote.Β Thank you.Β Just love ya Larry!Β Hope things are well with you and your family.Β Terry Kay
Oh, so touching. Loved it.Β
Dear Anwer,. Thank you so much.Β I am so honored that you followed me.Β This afternoon I will be able to read some of your work. Love, Terry Kay
Deep thanks.
Blackbutterfly,. Thank you so much!Β Terry Kay
Barry,. Thank you.Β It means a lot to me.Β Love, Terry Kay
An uncaged heart flying with winged creatures, yayy your awesome poetry reminds us to imagine and dream and fly with your words. Kudos for this beautiful poem!! The rhyme scheme is super as well!
pls pleez do review/ comment my newest poem too, it's nice to hear from fellow poets for exchange of thoughts, Β or else it feels like a monologue.
A great write.Β
Thanks for sharing.Β
Leah,. Thank you very much.,. Love, Terry Kay
Wow!Β Thank you again.Β Terry Kay