Poem -
~UNFILTERED~
Dusted ashes could be
An essence of smoke
Fiery flames to burn again
Fierce and true within me
I would ask your lips
For my next life
What a benediction
To that dearest someone
The despondency of the longing
At the essential of my existence
The color stained the words
For poetry of a paper heart
A fear of nothing to say
Yet all that I write
Are feelings and emotions
Because they taste like ecstacy
Moving me the way music does
You are my passion's inspiration
Every whisper and wind of it
If only you would answer my call
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Comments
It seems a bit much to simply quote nearly half your poem Mr Wolf, but I couldn't decide the lines I liked the most. All of it seems so deep, yet an undeniableĀ sense of strength underneath it all. Have you met Magic Bellemore on this site? He has very similar work and I reckon you'd love some of their work, as much as I have enjoyed yours. Smiles and peace. Good to see you again ;). Kind regards. The Fish of the Sea.
I thank you for always giving such positive feedback Fish,I your words are kind and uplifting, you seem to have a very perceptive eye. I have not heard of the person you mentioned, but will certainly look into it. Again thank you, blessings and grace to you my friend.
Wonderful write!......................Jim
Thank you for reading JimĀ