Poem -

Unfinished - maybe part of my testimony

I've always took the easy way out,
Funny how it never worked out,
I always said time to make that change
But my actions stayed the same
Fooling everyone, but me and God knew the truth 
He took everything from me and brought me back down to the roots
Never appreciated what I had 
God made me humble myself before he brought me back
He knows were not perfect and like any child we make mistakes
He understands we get lost and we question faith

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Tony Taylor

Hi Vannak,  love the questioning part of this write...........how important soul searching truly is..........great read my friend...........smiles.............T  xx

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Vannak Mak

Thank you guys very much.   It's still a work in progress but I just felt like I had to share it. I wish I had more time to focus on writing because I'm enjoying it more and more each day.  I have a couple of ideas for some books now I just have to write them down.

'Miss Cherie i guess I never appreciated what I had because things came easy to me, so I had to really hit rock bottom , people say they hit rock bottom , but trust me you'll know when you get there.  

Thanks again for the comments and taking time out of your day to read and write about them, any input would be greatly appreciated.  I' don't know when this one will be finished but hopefully soon!!!

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