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Valerie Beasley...

Hi Stephen!  You know sometimes love is made into a "complication" because certain folks would rather step away and use it against you.  Some people can't be "needed" they have no capacity to sustain the responsibility.  So they tell you "you're just to needy".  It absolves them for accepting love from the other party.  Great write!

val

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Stephen Weyant

profound statement Valerie! I can understand this!

in fact it may be the case!

I will ponder the matter and look to adjust my perspective!!!

thanks so much!

hope you are well

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April Mitchell

A short message but very powerful and loud one as well!So may comments can be derived from so few words!So i will just say in short Beautifully done!:-)

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Stephen Weyant

thanks again april

I started writing haikus after I read many of susan oriellys! check her out on this site when you get a chance!

take care

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Tina Moore

great haiku stephen as love is not needy if the other person loves back and accepts it .a thinking one it is   good work   tina x

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Stephen Weyant

thanks tina

love is definitely not a one way street!!!

appreciate your comment

take care!

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Susan O'Reilly

hey Stephen great thought-provoking haiku they are fun when you get into them well done congrats so I was your muse for a while i feel very blessed thanks x

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Stephen Weyant

hey there susan

I do enjoy a haiku!

yes it is true! when I first joined this site, i read a lot of your work and very quickly became a fan! i continue to enjoy your writings, looking forward to more!

in fact, the first haiku i wrote, unhinged, was about your work!!!

so thank you! i am grateful!

wish you well

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