Uninvited Season
Wafting on the wind,
the smells of new beginnings.
Warm currents flowย
dancing and swirlingย
lifting strands of hair
gently with invisible hands.
Little green buds,
unfurling, shyly, tentatively.
Jeweling the once bare treesย
with bright new emeralds.
Thrice curved mountainย
in the distance,
glows grassy green
gleaming in golden sunlight.
Haloed with white puffy clouds.
When suddenlyโฆ
Playful currents fled.ย
Baby buds shivered.
Mountain in the distanceย
disappeared behind a screen ofย grey,
scowling thunderously.
The loving light of gold,
smothered, plunging the worldย
into darkness.
Bone-chilling, arrogantย
gusts of wind blew.
Chasing away any warmth
that may have hidden.ย
The grass ruffled and bent
rippling like water,ย
turning from green to light green
green to light green asย
fingers of cold weaved its wayย
into the miniature world of insects.
Then came the frost.
Coating all in a shiny layer of ice,
freezing the grass to sharpest of blades.
Finally, the last wave came.
An array of frigid flurriesย
dispatched from the skyย
attacking all in sightย
muffling and muting the world.
Until all was silent.
Allย was white.
All was frozen.
ย
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Excellent..... thanks
Awe Thanks Lorris :)
amazing poem!
Thank You Ella :)
Very nice! Beautifully picturised.ย
We all run, but the undue conversation can chase us to the new world; through contracts of humiliations, demoralizations which the wild weather possesses.
Wow thanks,ย Mister Sย yourย comment itself is like beautiful poetry :)
The world is beautiful without accidents and mishaps; seen and unseen; I realised when my fingers got touched.
Thereโs a beautiful insight to this poem which touched my heart...amazing!!!
Thank you so much, Denise :)
well, You're definitely from the U.K. I thought that Ireland had nicer weather, but I can vouch for Scotland being cold and inhospitable to about everyone. I have some pen pals up there, and they're always telling me about how the snow falls heavy over Perth and Glasgow. I don't know if it's the same inย Unspecified City,ย Ireland, but I can imagine the feeling of snap winter well enough from My own experiences with Alabama weather here in the states. Our seasons can't make up their mind. We have blizzards in June and Heat waves in December.
-Cheers from across the Pond,
Dmitri
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It's never usually this bad here on the coast... I guess global warming and all that have been making the weather a little crazy these past few months. We could never have imagined that a storm like Ophelia would hit us a few months back, it's a bit mind-blowing!ย ย
Smiles and peace : )
congrats for winning.
Congrats??
Thank you so much you guys :)
Congrats for winningย
You totally deserve this win ; )
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Awe, Thank you sisย :)
Congrats.....Fatima......Congrats...
Thank you Lorris :)
Wow... This is awesome... Congratulations on a well deserved win
Thank you so much, I was kind of surprised :)
congrats to such a superb win and epic write!
Awe, thank you loads, Lisa :)
I was just like, where did you dig this up? (LOL)
Mitsali!ย
Oh my god! That is beautiful! What an astoundingly well written poem.ย
You're amazing, young lady.ย
Matthew.ย
Matthew!
Thank you so much,
you're a darling :)