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Universal

Universal

Gilded sand brine kissed
Quietude rudely dismissed
Plankton hound starfish
Under a lambent wish

Brailed upon epic expand
Serene-moon coxswain hand
Whitecaps surge ashore
Reaching towards encore

Stars beyond a milky way
Infinite phases in vast array
Chasing ultimate dream
Along a quicksilver slipstream

Planets align magnetic capture
Dance around solar rapture
Nocturne astounding harmony
Earmarked by symphonic key

Safe harbor nature’s appeal
Afore a cleft of holy seal
Notes of discord planted
A God’s aria maybe recanted
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sally

Brilliantly executed, captured my heart from the very beginning. Loved it !

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Dean Kuch

I initially thought this was monorhyme, Lisa, until I reached the second stanza.
The aabb rhyme scheme you have used here lends such a bouncy, upbeat rhythm to an otherwise moribund poem on mankind's poor, inhumane treatment of this Big Blue Marble called Earth that we all share and call our home.
Exceptional!
~Dean β™₯?β™₯

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Simon Bromley

Such a lovely use of words, thoroughly enjoyed.

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