Poem -
Unnoticed
I died, but no one noticed
They continued on talking
As I simply passed away
They go on laughing
Seemingly undisturbed
By the extent of my decay
Around me all is vibrant
Colourful and bright
But I have turned cold and gray
An unnoticed corps
Left rotting day after day
I guess this is where I'll stay
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Comments
Hey TWILLA!!...this is a VERY creative write..... reminds me of the Egyptians perspective on death and mummification .....maintaining consciousness after the body has stopped functioning..... some compelling phrasing here...... well conceived and delivered!!.....ALL STARS!!..... enjoyed this!!.....LOVE and ROCKETS!!.....T xo ???☀
Wow! Thank You! Most flattering comment I've gotten! I'm beaming! ?
Thank you very much. This is one of those that seemed to literally conceive itself in my head and had me reaching, half asleep, for my phone to get the words down before they were lost.