Poem -

unrestrained

author
Jai

nothing
   held
        me
             back

so i exPLODed

like a dream
that you are 
seeing 

NOW

burned into 
your retina-

fire/tears

scarring my memory
on everything 
you envision

like
all the time you spent
                              away

you saw me 
in everything. 

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Total votes: 2
Tags: 
Abstract
Poetry Genre: 
Verse
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author
Tony Taylor

Well done JAI!!.....Abstract indeed!!....Love the way you laid this out!!.....reads powerfully!!.....ALL STARS!!....and .....WELCOME to COSMO!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!....T xo  :  ) 

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