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Unsincerely Yours

Unsincerely Yours

She never did say goodbye, or post him
those letters she claimed
to have laboured and lost so much sleep over

 

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Marion

I love your choice of unsincere as opposed to insincere here, I don't know why but it adds a little sarcasm? In fact the cold matter of fact tone and use of very few words implies the subject doesn't give much of a hoot anyway. I'm probably completely wrong but anyway I know I will be completely right in stating...I am the first to get here also đŸ€© Hope you have the best day Neville x

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Neville

am I that transparent you can see write through me ........................ full marks Marion x

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Gwendoline

I love how you capsulate a significant moment in life. The one action that has such a huge effect on a person. I sense such emptiness and rejection here
Gwen x

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Neville

it pays to have a good memory and the very latest state of the art encapsulater handy ............................................ thank you kindly
Neville x

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Gwendoline

Lol the gadgets we can get our hands on these days 😂x 

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Tony Taylor

Indeed!! ~ I can see Write through you!!.....you are stellar wordsmith my friend....playing with words and phrasings in unconventional fashion ....making your words and their applications truly your own unique blend of Neville-ness!!......ALL STARS!!......you rock dear poet brother!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!........T xo  ; )

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Neville

thank you Tony .. I sincerely hope you took the scenic route .. reciprocated retro rockets heading your way sir ............................... N :)

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