Poem -
Unsure
Crazed Mind Pt 1
I really have no clue. Probably pretty average, prove me different.
Yes no.
De Ja Vu.
Head loose.
Look like a goose.
Sound like one too.
Hope they hear.
Through my fear.
Stand and listen.
To you, I`m missing.
No control.
A never-ending string of thought,
Melodies that do not fit together.
Contradicting ideas caught.
Red-handed.
Move, stay standing.
Take me away.
Still standard.
Lol. Thoughts to actions.
To thoughts again.
To beliefs to values.
See the end.
Trapped.
It happens.
Lost at home.
Awake, Still Sleeping.
What now?
Don`t see how?
Me neither.
Still sleeping.
Wake me up
The Fish of the Sea
Marion`s InspirationΒ
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Comments
Beautifully written piece well-penned
Awwww thanks so much Lisa. The picture is not even a Fish! It's a crustacean! I'm not sure why I find that hilarious. Over tiered lol. Thanks so much for your kind words. All the best. The Fish of the Sea.
Love it Mr Fish...love the craziness of thoughts conveyed which are exactly what thoughts are like....mine anyway...chaotic and sometimes scary and out of control. Am I the Marion mentioned here? Maybe anotherΒ Marion you know...regardless...well written gem...pinned ?
Aww Thanks, Marion, just popped into my head this morning lol, and its so true, my mind feels empty at the moment, so its almost like I can feel the background noise! ;). And yes, this was inspired by one of yours! I`ll edit this comment when I find the poem again! But thanks again for your kind comment. Its really appreciated so very much. All the Best and kind regards. The Fish of the Sea
Found it! From the inspiration ofΒ DEAD alarm CLOCKS.Β I really liked this poem, Marion! Kind regards. The Fish of the Sea.
You know what...you don't know how honoured I am by that...it's hard to believe that something I wrote inspired someone else...I'm.really flattered and touched and am going to take my swelling head to bed now...?? Hugs lovely man and...sometimes white noise is preferable. Keep writing your excellent poems ?
Awww no problem! I love your work from you and all the other inspiring writers on here. Such a wonderful place the Cosmos is! I hope you get some rest, Marion! I look forward to seeing your new poems! All the Best and kind regards. Your friend, The Fish of the Sea.
I think we all have crazy thoughts at times. I love how you used them, or the idea of them, to write this fab poem x
Aww again thanks so much, your lasting support makes me feel... honoured. From such a talented poet like yourself. You words always touch me~ All the Best and Kind regards. Your friend, the Fish of the Sea.
Hugs xx