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Surrouned by people, yet I feel so alone..Β 
Β  I can feel my heart breaking, I don't want to go on..
Β  A lifetime of sadness, heart ache and pain..
Β  Has driven me completely insane..Β 
My screams for help could not be heard.Β 
Β  Every vision i had slowly blurred..
The loneliness has made me irate..
Β  All my anger turned into hate..
Never a chance of feeling whole..
Β  I'm left with no heart and a blackened soul..
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Byd0nz

Hi Amanda. Well this is very powerful and has a real feel. Many could identify with that great first line. An inner battle thats not easy to conquer however pen to paper is a help.

Cheers, best wishes. Byd0nz.

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tonya turner

I sure can relate until I was the one being friends with the children that sat alone,god is good,popularity is when everyone is your friend

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linda wright

this is a very intense poem i can relate keep writing you are talented linda

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