Poem -
Upon Her Ears
Upon Her Ears
At the very same time he brushed aside
That single strand of her night wilden hair
He whispered soft through grey flecked beard
Then
Blew these words upon her ears
Have no fear my love for now although
I let you go I shall return and love thee even more so
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So sad 😪😪 Brilliant short verse that gives deep its readers much to think about x
Thanking you has become something of a conditioned reflex Being Me & truly tooly :) x
Hey NEVILLE!!....you have a very unique way of painting imagery within your poetry.......it has the most compelling use of phrasing and wonderfully detailed intent being conveyed quite beautifully!!......ALL STARS!!......A pleasure dear poet brother!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo : )
I just can't thank you enough my friend .. Many huge and sincere thank you's Tony .. Ever appreciated & Always welcome ... All Good Things, Neville :)
Love this because it has two interpretations...I choose the second...menacing and a little bit creepy...why...cos I'm that kind of gal 😃
Great write Neville x
well you certainly sound like my kinda gal .. and there is the other option too of course .. so glad you felt able to mix n match Marion .. Many thanks indeed ..................... N 😃:) x
You have a wonderful style and you do very much remind me of another amazing writer who used to be on here and I had meant to pin this and now it is done. Keep writing Neville you truly brighten up with site with your unique writes my friend x
as long as folk keep reading, I shall be more than happy to post my friend .. Oh' and thank you for the thumbs up :) x