Vacancy
*Jill's Wonderland Challenge*
In the middle of time is nowhere,
In that realm, I stagnate there.
Rest-stop aside deserted crossroads,
Worn landscape scenery erodes.
Notions forge residual sands,
Grains sift through wrung hands,
Fated nightmares take hold,
Phobias manifest as fears unfold.
Repetition an ambitious lost cause,
Tally all demons and flaws.
Each path to travel an option,
Neon flickers, proceed with caution.
Vacancy, in psychedelic motel,
Drippy faucet allotted hell.
Gas-gauge languishes on E,
Evaporated like sanity
Dreams crumble to silt,
Regret over sorrows spilt.
Pointed fingers at a reflection,
Yield judgmental rejection.
A speck, each moment alive,
Grueling habits survive.
Routines haunt a brain,
Raven mocks, βNevermore sane.β
Pounding within an hourglass,
Wayward nostalgia will pass.
Soon moments will shatter,
A journey will no longer matter
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Some of our best writes comes from emotional drive, very well done indeed n pinned.
thank you Simon. it has taken me a long time to finally finish this one and the challenges help to propel this to the finish line,
Another great write!
Thank you kindly TinaΒ
Fabulous β xxx
Thank you kindly P
Lisa a great write
this poem isΒ
about not sleeping
and bad dreams
it that right tryingΒ
to understandΒ
so if i do it to
Yes your interpretation is quite correct some say dreams are humanities journey through wonderland, but I think itβs only the byproduct of snacking before bed lolΒ
I never snack before I go to bed I never have anything after dinner even wine
Thatβs an excellent habit to have.Β
Sheer brilliance as always Lisa β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
Thank you kindly Jill
Pinned xxx
Thank you kindly Jill
The figurative language is brilliant.
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Thank you kindly Katina.currently working on my new challenge...... βwisteriaβ
I like this write a lot... it rings true for my experience
the use of images is fascinating.. love it.
Beautiful use of words....Β
vanessa
Thank you Vanessa will check your work out soon
My Dear Lisa,
Brilliant write.Β As usual, you are up to all challenges.
All my love,
Larry xxx
Thank you kindly LarryΒ