Violet Eyes
Watch me…
See me move..
Gliding, sliding, floating through the room.
Women look , then look away, and look again..
Unsure of why they need to ..but just do!
No great beauty, but..
…And there’s the rub,
I am, in the beholders perception ,
just
‘Fascinating Violet eyes ‘,
A little duller now with age
intense and deep and fathomless,
but with an inscrutable mystique,
that beguiles the unsuspecting
and the weak.
‘Elizabeth Taylor eyes’, my mama said.
The eyes have it… but so too the walk
I love my walk! slow, deliberate, languorous.
I have a good core, a dancers core
and pride keeps me tall .
My feet a little large but graceful,
my style more timeless than tasteful,
and always, an enticing balm, like pheromones,
drawing flies to my web.
I knew nothing of my power when young,
such time wasted!
But now ? well now
I Scrutinise,
Mesmerize,
Polarize,
and utilize….
My violet eyes!
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Comments
Love this very much very well written
Hi Kieran..the violet is rather more wishy washy these days!! Thanks so much for reading and commenting- appreciate it my friend!
Lodigiana x
You have to admire the glamour of those 1950s actresses (well I do anyway)...some were so stunning ! I think my all time favourite is Lana Turner and your poem had a certain fifties feel. I guess that's why I liked it so much
Didn't the iconic southern rock band, The Eagles, record a song by this name, Lodigiana?
Oh no, never mind. That was "Lyin' Eyes".
My bad, heh-heh-heh...
I once knew a girl with violent eyes. She scared me and I don't scare easily!
I think she was part succubus.
❝I love my walk! slow, deliberate, languorous.
I have a good core, a dancers core
and pride keeps me tall.
My feet a little large but graceful,
my style more timeless than tasteful,
and always, an enticing balm, like pheromones,
drawing flies to my web.❞
In all serious this was very well penned.
~Dean ツ ♥♥♥
Hi Dean thanks so much for reading-, this made me smile.....so glad my eyes are/were Violet rather than violent!!! they really would have been 'Killer eyes'! I cant imagine you getting spooked at much my friend!!! .... Btw love The Eagles.. now have an ear worm with the song!! all good! xx
Lodigiana
My pleasure as always, Lodigiana. ツ
Hello Lodigiana...
Violet eyes, I would need contacts...
I saw some that are cat eyes...
I haven't seen violet yet...
Send me a pic!
That would be awesome!
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Hi Hun I need the contacts now!! but as a baby they were ( according to my Mum) a violet/blue but being ancient I only have black and white baby
photos!!! But I will check it out hun- thanks so much for reading and commenting- always appreciate it so much
Lodigiana xx
Wow!!... this is a fabulous write!!...... strikingly sensual in its phrasing as well as the images that are created in the minds eye of the reader.... of an almost cat-like woman moving through the world with the ability to be ~ " slow, deliberate, languorous.."..... and too ( for me) become the thing that incites the mind to leap to all kinds of sensual role playing!!..... It's so beautifully languid and luxurious that it took me away..... and made me linger in enigmatic eyes of Violet!!.......PINNED this one LO!! ~ I had too!!......you're amazing girlfriend..... seems you can do just about anything with a pen!!........LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo ???☀☀♥ ?
I am totally thrilled that you liked this piece Tony! sometimes when I start to write I often have no idea quite where it will go but if it immersed you in the moment then thats good enough for me my brother poet!!! Thank you
Lodigiana x
Love this!! It's all in the eyes!! And also your imagination and creativity, you have skills my dear poet sister ??????
Thank you so much Wayne really appreciate it ! xx
Lodigiana
Beautiful refrain Ana. I have green blue eyes that change with my emotional state my husband says they are beautiful I also have brown specks in them too that spark when I get mad. Your writing is so easy to relate to. I adore your pen
You describe your eyes so beautifully - I'll bet they are stunning! Thanks so much for reading and commenting my dear friend xx
Lodigiana