Visions of my life
I hurt when I look in the mirror
Visions of my life coming clearer
The disguise is off, the mask is down
I'm down...
Caught up in it....I sit
Drained from it....I quit
Memories faded away, hopelessly thinking about tomorrow
The sorrow....
Shattered truths...pieced together lies
Understand my cries
Heartbroken....
Torn apart without words spoken
My mask is off and the pain appears
Tucked away for years
I got questions I need to ask
I need answers to my past
I hurt when I look in the mirror
Visions of my life coming clearer
Sad am I?
These constant struggles to get by
Caught up in...I sit
I throw in the towel....I quit
The stress that will continue
I'm in the mirror asking "what has gotten into you"
Happiness has faded off
Lost....
Shattered pieces that won't fit back together
Left with lies that only get better
I hurt when I look in the mirror
Vision of my life....become clearer!
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Comments
Morris,
What's up!! I tell you, William is all over this site, (doing his thing quite well), just as you, serving everybody with some great poems....(Many of the Women) as well..."In the life of a poet,pain and pleasure be his game...Pleasure to live a life, sought out, yet,so hard to find, once concealed though the mask of time, dares now no hold....Pains of he, by many, to place suffer on the content of his character but refused, he to fall, stood fast, his plan of call...Shook it off, placed on his hat and walked upright, pass his problems, core..... for all of them, (in due time), shall fall..........To his (Destinies Call).".... I guess we need to call you, (Mr.Zales) , you have a bucket load of jewels, in your poem arsenal....The floor is yours...keep them coming...
Later,
Jim
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Jim,
Yes there is a lot of talent on this site and it's amazing how it continues to grow. I applaud each and every poet not only on this site but on others. This poem is just another piece that just came to me, a vision and i took it and laid this out.. lol "Mr Zales" thats funny and thank you.
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wow,
Grasping your words are, intense read.
If everyone poured themselves out with words as you - maybe things would be different
Your amazing at writing,- what a talent. Its therapy. for you and others to know- some days others to feel what they do too... but you can express. Wow
Hope poetry helps my friend
Love & light
Jim,
Yes there is a lot of talent on this site and it's amazing how it continues to grow. I applaud each and every poet not only on this site but on others. This poem is just another piece that just came to me, a vision and i took it and laid this out.. lol "Mr Zales" thats funny and thank you.
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@Sandra Thank you so much for your kind words... my motivation comes from poets and people like you. thanks again
great poem x