Poem -
Void
Lonely heart,
lonely mind
disconnected soul,
thoughts that are so unkind.
sorrowful troubled face,
body and soul abandoned,
of the love that has been misplaced.
deserted and shunned,
nothing left to do,
empty and hollow
a space that was once you.
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Well placed together, collections of words of the heart and from the heart is this one Claire...Sincerity from the hear,written all over this "Perfect Storm," dear lady.....Job well done in its presentation to your readers...
Warm regards,
Jim
Thank you for reading...!
You are quite welcome, my friend...
Jim
Hi Claire I really liked this write, the lines were broken perfectly, and seemed to pull you along with perfect timing,........to bring you to........" a space that once was you"..........powerful ending my friend.......just a lovely write...........well done.......tony xxx
Thank you Tony, it means a lot when people take the time to read my poems x