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Void Of Life

Void Of Life

Staring into this barren wasteland  void of life and desolation 

Our own destruction has decimated this prosperous nation 

We were warned by God to turn from our wicked ways 

Or His mighty hand would destroy the inhabitants of this place 

His Words fell on deaf ears as we were blinded by our inhibitions that spiraled out of control 

If but only 10 righteous souls were found, then the cities would not be burned to the ground 

There were no good people left to come forth from this God less abyss 

All were left was the mighty angels who rescued lot and his family from a scorched land 

Lot's wife was told not to look back but could not  resist temptations wrath 

Lessons learned from which this story is true 

God was willing to save all for a sinless few 

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Richard Waters

Wonderful write. Simple as that.

Love the way you set a scene and then expand into details of emotion, ideas or values.

Take care !

:)

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Bradford

Hey Richard thanks.  I had an idea for the picture but I went into a biblical tale instead . I liked the way it turned out . Glad you enjoyed this write. Hugs to you rock 

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Cleo Tomi Olajide

Hey Rock, Great write, simply Amazing, Thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece. Warm regards. Cheers.

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Bradford

Hey cleo.  Thanks glad you enjoyed this write.  Hugs to you rock 

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Devon La Porte

Hardrock, my applause to your write on a really cool bible story. Love these lines.

"If but only 10 righteous souls were found, then the cities would not be burned to the ground"

Allstars to you good sir.

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Bradford

Hey Devon I actually had a  different write in mind about alien's but it took a different turn when I started writing it . I will try that one in a future write.  Cheers rock 

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Bradford

Hey flower girl thanks for your sweet comments.  I am trying very hard to write a tight write.  Hugs to you and happy oceans rock.  Always glad to see you on my page. Your friend rock 

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