WAITING FOR THE RIGHT TIME
Even the youngest sit in calm
With eyes wide open,
Though the oldness hinders him the posture right
In serious and authoritative voice
'Dear children' , ! perfect silence from the audience
'A piece of advice for you' , continued he,
'I know you the workers hard, get early up,
Very sincere, independent and courageous' !
'Don't move ahead, sit there' , to the youngsters
Whose eagerness tend them up.
It's the right time-dawn and dusk
Don't change it, for the dim light
Makes their sight half' ' ,he added.
Practise the humming sound,
Will it ensure the depth of their sleep,
Of course , if they are not , will respond,
Be very careful !
Care should be taken more to the age old ones
Who will crush you over and over,
Than the youth's single tap.
Prefer not , as can , to an extent not possible,
The parts hand free and visible.
The joyful , over enthusiastic mosquito
To the places convenient to hide
Till the time apt !!
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Greetings Sayed,
Your pen consist of many mysteries, very methodically delivered by the author, for all things exist
an open door policy, as seen through the eyes of, he who (through shadows of relentlessness),
sets out, on their most deliverable task at hand,(their attack).Preferably when the guard of the
assaulted,appears at its lowest awareness. As to the mentoring of, that of a young bomber,
being placed in the care of an older, teaching and passing on, the skills and tricks of his
trade, in the mastery of striking, when the time is right and it appears that the weaker, (not because of lack of strength), but due to not having knowledge of the planned attack,nor their reason for the assault. Success is he, to the skilled,it is then, when the innocent are found to be at their most vulnerable point. During their point of contact by the assaulter…..Sayed my friend it appears this explains a variety of misfortunes and mishaps in our society, in which we live...Though to me it plays host to the many catacombed ideas or explanations, utilized by a trained and /or untrained mercenary, be it for the alleged good of the people, are for the bad of all mankind…In this case like that of the mosquito, for him the good, for his thirst has now been quenched and he is now a martar, yet the bad, for the target prey, (all mankind)...For he is now a terrorist.....Please correct for error...
Sincerely,
Jim
Sorry Sayed,
that last line should read…In this case like that of the mosquito, for him the good, for his thirst has now been quenched and he is now a martyr, yet the bad, for the target prey, (all mankind)...For he is now a terrorist.....Please correct for error...finger became a little heavy and lazy on that (a) in martyr.....
Take Care,
Jim
Thank you Jim
your deep observation give an insight to notify and compose the new aspects.
best wishes
hello Jim
see my new poem, To my beloved, thanks
thanks your comment and very extra ordinary interpretation made by you.