Poem -
Wanna Get Fucked Up
I....I've had a bad day.
In a series of,
unfortunate events-
My team lost,
wife hates me....
stress is mounting buildingΒ
on how much I procrastinate in life.
Can only lift my head, inches...
When old faithful barkeep
asks me what venom
is next to bite,
After all put up with
and what's beenΒ
miserably mumbled in what's said
a bad effing day....
My constituent Β
from down the bar
(And how do you follow a fucked up day
with a fucked up question)
Asks........
Wanna get fucked up?
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Comments
Devon, I'll share a drink or two lol. This is quite good and authentic, feels 100% personalized and realistic. Thanks for sharing, whether the poem is happy, sad, or mad, it's always interesting reading the poets own sentiments
Thanks Amber. Thats means a lot because im always looking to put originality to realistic situations. I wanted to capture the feelings of a broken person trying to drink oneself to oblivion. Thank you Amber for the comment and first roundsΒ on me. Peace!
Devon a sad affair when ya drink alone.....lol but looks like someone was having fun in the image looks like tom hanks lol nice read Devon
It is very sad when your forced to drink as George Thorogood sang about lol. I couldn't find a picture to match and then I thought this would add some humor, Tom Hanks taking pictures with this passed out guy on his phone....thats funny lol. Thanks Lisa for the comment, love and peace.