Poem -
War
By: Pix5
My own head a war zone,
Myself an enemy, A killer that I face, My own mind trying to murder me, Trying to dodge hits that I designed, With one goal of absolute death, When I try to fight back all I see is my reflection,
My biggest enemy I can't bring myself to fight,
For all I can see is broken pieces, That others have already left behind.
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Comments
You have completely described a darkness that possibly..we can all relate to. Great writing x
Thank you! I use poetry as a coping mechanism, I'm not very good yet but I appreciate the comment!
It's a great coping mechanism Lynn...I use it for same. Don't put yourself down there are no Shakespeares on here. Personally I write for myself...I don't really care if people rate my stuff or not because I don't write for my ego...I write for my soul. Look forward to reading more of your work x
Thank you! I appreciate that a lot!
Great writing here!
Thank you so much!
keep coping, it helps all! cool write! welcome to the Cos!.............................Jim