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We Are But Wax

We Are But Wax

Our candlelit journey begins at our birth
We’re Ignited with love from our point of creation.
 We travel through life and exist on this earth
like a candle to shine and to promise salvation

We all need the darkness to see candlelight,
no matter how dark all your days might become.
The light from your candle will always be bright
all other flames start from the lighting of one

When young we’re a candle, the wax  straight and  strong
our wick burns a flame that is always alight.
The older we get the more worn we become,
as the wax melts the flame doesn’t burn quite so bright

Your candle ,like you, has to fight to survive,
If left by a window a breeze could snuff out.
But flicker it will and remain just alive
and  spread like a beacon, its light all  about

Be like the best candle you ever could be.
Be the light in the life of your friends,
live your life as a candle , your  flame burning  free
burn your candle of life from both ends!
                                
 

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StevieC

Love the analogy Lodi! great 

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Greg Etsell

WOW!!! what great poem
I love it I love the meaning
 

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lodigiana

Hi Greg, so pleased that you liked it.. there are so many analogies that we can make between life and candlelight..it seemed too good an opportunity to miss once I had thought about it! Thank you so much for reading..and particularly enjoying it!  xx

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lodigiana

Thank you  so much for you kind words my friend 

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Shaun Cronick

Lodigiana, only you can write the way you do.
Originality and captivation and tricky end rhymes beautifully woven and so effortlessly, all into one.
Hope this comment finds you and finds you well my friend and thank you.
Shaun. x.

 

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