Poem -
What's it All About?
What's it all about?
Living, dying, laughing,crying
Birthing, dying
Seeking, trying
Ups and downs
Ins and outs
Roundabouts
Mind full of doubts
Heading somewhere
Going nowhere
All our yesterdays
Making space for our tomorrows
Banking our sorrows
Loving, giving
Taking, living
Grieving, dying
Sadness, sorrow
A new dawn tomorrow
Whats it all about?
Heartache, soulache,
Brainache,
Finding strength to go on
When all hope seems gone.
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Comments
It's madness. Great poem, question everything.
Yes, I had come to that conclusion Gerard. And indeedΒ do question everything ;-) x
Nothing is exactly what it seems.
No one is themselves 100% of the time.
Keep an open mind.
Close and lock no doors.
Madness comes in small doses sporting large needles.
Inspiration comes from the most unlikeliest of places.
Keep your eyes peeledβcrows love 'em and needn't work so hard to get to them.
The truth is "out there..."
~Dean Kuch
Dear Dean, thanks for casting your expert eye and acute mind over my work. Much appreciated your words of wisdom. Ru.
I love your work, Ru T, but I'm hardly wise.
Worldly, perhaps; I've been around the block a time or two.
Keep up the great writing and I'll keep reading.
Can you claim the same?
~Dean ;)
This is a thought-provokingΒ piece, willing self-speculation. The very question, what's it all about, I know is such an everyday thought for me personally. Well written and good work!Β
Thanks for visiting my page and taking the time to read my work and leave feedback. Very much appreciated. Ru.
Wonderful thought-provoking piece. I love your pen Ru
Hi Lisa, many thanks for taking your time to read and casting your expert eyes over my offerings. Much appreciated. Ru x
A very interesting concept, and an amazing approach. It's a fantastic read! I loved every second. So thought provoking and stimulating! Thank you for this