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What's on Your Mind Adam?

It was all my fault, really, simply unbelievable.
I had unearthed the untouchable forbidden fruit.

Originally, I thought to unify my universe.
With an uncommon  approach to this whole matter.

Undeniably, I was originally unwilling to be disobedient.
But totally uncertain on which way to proceed.

Unlike the times of old, now unreachable to us.
My co-patriot and I found ourselves fighting an undercurrent.

This whole situation is quite unusual.
So much fuss over a mystery to be unlocked.

the goal, so close to being finished, now unable to do so.
My understanding was to obtain the secret to everlasting life.

At least that's what the unfit one told me.

Now here we are unattached to the master.
I wish I could undo the whole scenario.

But I won't
For I am unapologetic and unafraid.

Now here I exist outside of paradise with this unassuming female.
Unfortunately, this might be a little unbearable.

Unlikely, because she looks good undressed like myself.
So we're not totally unlucky are we?

Yet we were unaware of what lay before us.
An unbelievable task of going without those niceties.

Although we were unworthy of the fathers love.
He refused to treat us unfairly.

It's like he would mention to me later.
Our crimes against him were unavoidable.

It was his plan, unbeknownst to us.
But such an idea was elusive until.

He unloaded his fury upon our unstable ways.
Against my descendants who still did unacceptable things.

Though we and they were uncivilized through time.
That probably is an understatement from myself.

I figured I'd probably unburden you with a lecture.
Such things are unappealing when you want to do what you do.

One day you all will untie yourselves from bondage (again)
Stop being underachievers and be the best.
Returning us to the beginning, again.

Unless, that's something you all unapproved of unanimously.

It's up to you.

Love,

Adam

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Dolly#7 Mclaren

The tears are streaming my face,TY so much for uploading this I am truly greatful for your words x

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John Young

I didn't expect that Amanda.  So much went into that interview (it came to me in a dream).  And I am so blessed to have you in my corner.   The tears are for joy.  Thanks.

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