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When I Can't

When I Can't

When I can’t find the words to say
I look back on all the memories we’ve made
As the tears flow down my face
I know we’ll meet again someday
When I can’t find the actions to do
I look back on all the moments I’ve shared with you
When I can’t find the days I’ve lost
I look back on all the paths we’ve crossed
I remember all the pain you leaving caused
When I can’t find the nights I’ve mourned
I look back on the journeys we’ve adorn
When I can’t find anything to go right
I remember, what it was like to be held tight
When I can’t find the tears to cry
I look back, on the moment, you flew to the sky
I’ll always look back to the question, why?
I’ll look back to the time I couldn’t say goodbye

Stephanie Davis
11/15/20
 

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Stephanie A. Ludwig

thank you, this poem was a little hard to write. but I needed to get it off my chest.

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Tony Taylor

Hey STEPHANIE,
This sounds VERY personal.....and if it isn't.....then it's even better.....because this certainly has impact.....as though someone close to you ~ "Flew to the sky..."......a lovely.... and a 'fond farewell' type write!!......ALL STARS!!......well crafted dear poet sister!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!....keep 'em comin' my friend!!........peace.......T xo  : )

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Stephanie A. Ludwig

I wrote it as a "general poem" for anyone, including myself losing someone close to them, that changed their life forever. I did indeed, however, have a hard time writing this. Thank you for your support and love. Truly means a lot to me from the bottom of my heart.

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Pratibha Savani

Hi stephanie. A truly sad but deep poem. Very effective and poem the last line says it all. Pxđź’ś

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Stephanie A. Ludwig

Thank you so much for taking the time to read this. Truly appreciate it. It was a hard write. 

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The fish of the sea

When I can’t find anything to go right
I remember, what it was like to be held tight

Sense of longing that you cant seem to shake, a heart that's been broken will surely break.

We are all here for you Step! Cosmo is here for you. Best wishes to you TFOTS

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The fish of the sea

XD, sorry about that, just the vibe I got lol. Hope you are well! TFOTS

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Marion

So much emotion in this Stephanie...terrific write đź’•

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Stephanie A. Ludwig

I am amazed at all the love and support I am getting from this poem, thank you so much for reading it!

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Yiyan Han

Every one lives in memories. A very emotional write, well done.

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Stephanie A. Ludwig

Your comment is very true, thank you so much for the feedback and the reading. It means a lot me, more than anyone will ever realize.

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