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When it Gets That Bad it Must be Broken

author
Neville

Had it not happened
when it happened
and how, when
and where that it did ..
Then you would
not be aware of just
how bad it can get
in a matter of seconds ..
In fact, it can get so bad
it might just as well be broken ..

 

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