Poem -
When They Fight
When they fight,Ā
I cut out my sight
for seeing them tears meĀ
apart.
I admit, IĀ have been a partĀ
of their arguing,Ā
doing what I feel isĀ
right.
Although most times
I stick my headphones in
and block out theĀ
world.
I wish he could seeĀ
just how much
this continuous fighting hurts
me.
I remain hiding after the battle,Ā
sometimes for days at a time, how
I wish IĀ knew when this pain wouldĀ
end.Ā
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Comments
Good write, thanks for sharing, My applause, My vote. I like the end part of the verse
" I remain hiding after the battle,
sometimes for days at a time, how
I wish I knew when this pain would
end."
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
I thank you for ur vote and your kind words!
I'm extremely grateful that I have poetry as an outlet. The ways the words can fit together are amazing. I don't know.how I'd get out my feelings any other way. I always hope others can find a healthy way to express how they feel. Thank you so much for your comment :)
This is a great little write with a whole lot of deep feelings displayed, well done becca,
"Although most times
I stick my headphones in
and block out the
world.
I wish he could see
just how much
this continuous fighting hurts
me."
sweetheart, i still as an adult escape to the land of headphones,
keep writing sweetie pie, your amazing, don't ever let go of yourself in the troubles of life, shine bright for all to see, vanishing into music is a safe place to regain yourself, if it's in the form of positively, often lyrics have a strong reflection on daily life make them beautiful ones, love to you little one, nardine xoxo
Thank you nardine. I hope I never quit writing! Music always makes me feel better and so I am glad it is here.Ā
I'm glad you have music and writing sweetie, keep smiling xoxo love to you, nardine xoxo