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Where do they all go ?

A sequel to broken promises

All those vows disregarded without a second thought .
They have not died , They still live on .
In a big ugly sack , they fight like blind rats .

Added to ,
by every new Promise
he fails to do .

In pieces and shards
Jagged in the sack
Do they never stick into your back ?

- or prick your conscienceĀ 
Can't you just for once ?
Keep a single promise ....

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Being Me

??Ā  oh I love it, Chris!Ā  It's really good as a sequel to the last one ??Ā  very well done ???Ā  pinned because...well, his could I not pin this. So glad you managed to do this x

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Pratibha Savani

Chris!! This is a great sequel keeping to the momentum of the first piece! A brilliant read and I love the line about prick your conscience!! Px ?

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