Poem - 22 September 2016, 16:17

Where dreams stand still

Byd0nz

where the sea meets the shore

A small girl throws paper pieces

with her worries writen on

The ripples take the words

With her worries away

The girl returns to her ruined land

The shame where Gaza lay.

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RRG (Rebecca)22 September 2016, 19:43

Rips me apart, reading this. I love your use of imagery and the ripple effect.

Byd0nz22 September 2016, 22:02

Hi Rebecca. Thanks for reading and comment. It is indeed a subject that touches our heart with a feeling of sadness.

best wishes. Byd0nz

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ℙ𝕆𝔼𝕋𝔼𝕊𝕊𝔻𝔸ℝ𝕂𝕃𝕐1008 years ago

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