Where The Wild Waters Flow
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When everything around me,
Begins to crumble and fall,
It is you that I call,
In a momentary relapse,
I collapse in a heap,
It is you that I dream of when I sleep,
When I’m out of love,
When all else fails,
I set sail,
When my heart doesn’t beat like it used to,
I run to you,
When I’m out of love,
I twist and turn,
I burn,
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For only you can take out the fire,
That’s tearing me apart,
That’s burning the inner walls of my heart,
Like a phoenix,
I fight my way out of this straightjacket,
From the chains that bind,
I turn and run,
Leave everything behind,
Just so that I can be by your side,
I turn to you wherever you may be,
For you are the only one that can set me free,
For when you stand next to me,
I feel stronger,
Than I ever thought I could be,
Deeper than the oceans,
Wider than the sea,
When I’m out of love,
I turn and I run,
I leave everything and go,
To where my love lies,
To where the wild waters flow,
By Sarfraz Ahmed
Copyright © 2020
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A truly beautiful write Safraz...I also love that this can be applied to a person or place or a god or belief...clever writing ...hugs ?
Marion,
I really value your feedback, thanks so much, I stumbled on this poem I wrote, recently and wanted to share it with you all. I wrote it as person yearning to be loved, but it's meaning lends itself for someone searching inner piece.Â
Thanks so much.
Sarfraz lots of love and hugs...?Â
wonderful poemÂ
as alwaysÂ
Greg,
​Thanks so much, glad you enjoyed it. There is more to come.
SarfrazÂ
Wow!! SARFRAZ!!.....This is magical dear poet brother.....I can hear it as a song so easily....you have such a wide base for your rhyme scheme here that it just leaps from the page as a love song....at least in my head (smiles)....Definitely my favorite of yours (so far) that I have read!!......ALL STARS!! & PINNED!!....well done my friend!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo : )
Tony,
Thanks so much my poet friend! Your words and kind feedback mean everything, one of my favourites, open to interpretation, I see it as a yearning a longing to be with one you love, or to be in a place that gives you peace and positivity! I will upload a few more that I have written, working on a few more publications, Tony LOVE & ROCKETS, and the MOON and Stars!!!Â
-- Novel use 1st time to see. Enjoyed reading this poem.
Yiyan thanks so much. Glad you liked it...