Why does it hurt?

I've got no you,
Everyones got me,
Why does it hurt?
I hate the ups and downs,
There is no escape,
Why does it hurt?
Being human,
The reasons have gone,
I need to pull myself out,
But my hands are tied down,
My eyes are shut closed,
My breath begins to slow,
A light rain touches my cheek,
The pain grows deeper,
My hearts beats slower,
Im stuck in a pool,
Why did it hurt?
Living as a human,
Now i'm just gone.

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Comments
Powerful and thought provoking.Â
Favorite linesÂ
There is only one place I would consider editing:Â
The first sentence seems like it's missing something.Â
Other then that, great work!Â
Everyones (Every one)Â
Nice write Krystal...can identify with your words as I suspect most humans can....descriptive and real ?
Thank you everyone for your kind words <3