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Why does it hurt?

I've got no you,
Everyones got me,
Why does it hurt?
I hate the ups and downs,
There is no escape,
Why does it hurt?
Being human,
The reasons have gone,
I need to pull myself out,
But my hands are tied down,
My eyes are shut closed,
My breath begins to slow,
A light rain touches my cheek,
The pain grows deeper,
My hearts beats slower,
Im stuck in a pool,
Why did it hurt?
Living as a human,
Now i'm just gone.

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Katina Woodruff...

Powerful and thought provoking. 

Favorite lines 

Living as a human,
Now i'm just gone.

There is only one place I would consider editing: 

I've got no you,
Everyones got me,

The first sentence seems like it's missing something. 
Other then that, great work! 

Everyones (Every one) 

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Marion

Nice write Krystal...can identify with your words as I suspect most humans can....descriptive and real ?

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Krystal B

Thank you everyone for your kind words <3

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