Poem -
WIDE OPEN
Open me wide…
Reach for our lust,
That wild, fathomless heat!
Open me wide…
Your tongue reads my body
As your fingers explore every
Pleading moan and quiver.
Open me wide…
As the smoke in our bones
Melt into fluid fire
And our souls diffuse
Into each other's flesh…
Open……….…me……..…wide
Our bodies echo exact harmony
Shattering into that final
Rhythmic aria…a primal hymn
Of you loving me loving you
In our wide open bed!
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Comments
WOW VAL!!..........this is amazingly compelling............your gift is undeniable............can't wait for the book!!..............hugz-n-smiles.............T xo
Tony! Thanks for your wonderful and encouraging comments. I am so glad that you decided to visit! I love to write erotic poems and stories. The possibilities are endless when you use all of your senses and explore desire and lust with that partner who takes you "beyond the beyond".
xoxo val
Honorable Poetess Valerie Eleby
Welcome back to COSMO, Highly erotic write, Human rareness among conception is fascinating. He lives in the world with animals, yet he shares in the ability of the angels to see and contemplate God. He can have his hands in the soil and his mind in heaven. Animals and angels cannot do that.For survival, man, like the animals but unlike the angels, has bodily urges – instincts that are self-preserving, the most important being eating and procreating. Eating keeps the man alive.
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
WM! Thanks so much for your comments. I write erotica because there is so much pleasure to be had within the confines of a "love match". Loving making is God given! He knew exactly how to make it perfect between a man and woman.
Much respect…
val
Valerie, the quality of this write is remarkable....movement and heat or movement in the heat is orchestrated to a stirring beat, primal in places, deliberate in places, total control throughout...pure quality and very hot and spicy....she's back! Great job, Val.
Chris! Thanks for checking this one out. Orchestration…yes, mind, soul, body…moving, taking, giving, receiving…surrendering. Love it!
val