Poem -
Wild Horses
Alabaster crashes ashore
Commissioned evermore
Salty foam in a wake
Relish lees in the break
Glide on crescent tide
Champion another ride
Astride silty sands
Bridle seafaring expands
Brackish steeds watery clave
Wild tis storms to brave
Briny kist winds blow
incite coral in undertow
Dusky azure blue
Reflect multi-hue
Selene goddess moon
Mystical telluric tune
AudaciousΒ lofty vendor
Laud by neon splendor
Elemental minor chord
ChaosΒ chases in accord
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Comments
this a wonderful poem
thank you Greg
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Thank you kindly Jill
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you have an eloquent vibe here
Thank you kindly Greg
A great,polychromatic visual effect
through one's fantasy,I love the blending of powerful horses with the seemingly limitless and extremely powerful ocean
you have the ability to help one see the beauty in resemblance and similarity among nature's elements,their force and animate life.You make everything fit so well,together,the fluctuating manes and the frothy waves riding in harmony,very detailed and descriptive writing,I also enjoy your use of ancient greek mythological terms,bravo,I applaud you!! Thank you for your comment too.
Thank you kindly Lakovos. Youβve captured the essence of the write amiably. I appreciate you stopping by to comment
Oh dear,the pleasure is all mine!
IAKOVOSΒ (JAMES)Β ARGITIS.
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Good morning poetess , I always love reading your work . Your words and picture go together perfectly to create a wonderful write , rock hope you are doing well under our circumstances in our country today :)
Thank you kindly Rocky you is da bomb!
Hello DARKLY!!...... the rhythm of this piece..... for me...... took the poem to a perfect place of the timing/tempo of waves upon the shore...... the succinctness of the phrasing made this possible..... with excellent word choices to comprise those magical phrases!! (as usual)........a fine piece of creative poetryΒ girlfriend!!........ALL STARS!!Β ........well penned........LOVE & ROCKETS!!........T xo.Β : )
thank you Tony for you stopping by to read....your support is greatly appreciated