Poem -
Wild Kiss
Part 2
kissing wild lips
ย ย ย so sensually wrapped
ย ย ย ย ย ย tastes like vanilla
ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย stubble scented of musk
ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย kisses soft and tender
ย ย ย ย ย ย ย as sexy lips part
ย ย ย plunging wild desires
under the stars
25-07-2021
Pratibha Savaniย
Finaleย coming soon....
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Hello P :)ย
another great addition to this subject. I especially loved the linesย
โplunging wild desires
under the starsโ
a nice rush at the end for the reader. Beautiful ink my friend x โค๏ธ
Hi Gwen. Thank you for reading and the comments. It has challenged me to write in such a way. I cant believe I did and also wanting to keep the short lines as in the first. Glad you think it worked well and the lines you liked. The finale part is up now. Last part to this poem. Pxxx
WOW, hot stuff! Nice write.ย
Thank you John. Experimenting with a different genre. Cos I never write stuff I like this. That is what this is. Thank you for reading and your thoughts. Nice to know it worked well. Final part is up now :) Pxxx
Pratibha, part 2 and things are certainly getter hooter under the poetry collar. Phew! And your condensed lines certainly cut to the chase and sensually don't hold back.
Love your short and punchy writing and nothing is wasted, not a word out of place or it would stall, it simply poetically snowballs gathering pace.
Great to see and so sublime to read.x.
Thank you Shaun for reading and your wise words of feedback. You have a wonderful knack to say it as it is. I love that.ย
Well...I've been quite active on a fb poetry group and I had posted pink kiss....what I didnt know is the attention it was going to get ;)....and I had dedicated to one of the admins on the group cos he had been writing his seduction titled poems in a few parts. And people wanted a follow up to pink kiss so thats how part 2 and 3 came. Although this took time as it had to follow the condensed short lines of the first poem in 8 lines! So was a bit of a writing challenge but I got there!! And they worked well. I was so pleased.ย
Thanks for reading as always Shaun. Px
Agreed with the comments above. But this one also feels a little darker to me. Like some hidden intent or someone held unwillingly. Either/neither/or, still a fantastic write. Such depth in your poetry, It's something to aspire to for sure!
Lol oh max I love your thoughts!! Well basically part 1 is from the guy point of view
part 2 is from the girl point of view
last part is from both
so I stuck to a beginning...middle...and end
Thats it! That simple!
thankย you for all the comments on my pink kiss!
cos I've not been as active on cosmo lately not many have seen this series. But I'm catching up where I can with others poems...like urs...I must check up what uve written! Px
Love the idea of a series like this P...clever and interesting my friend...very enjoyable ๐
Thank you Marion ๐
it definitely caused a sensation on pop lol
Pxxx