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Wind Dancer .. a Haiku

                                                                        High o’er those primrose banks
                                                                              Kites dance on thermals
                                                                           Without a care in the wild ..

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Marion

Short sweet and joyful...😊😊

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Neville

thank you M .. a bit like me? :) x

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Tony Taylor

I find the HAIKU to be the most difficult poem to write......you have done an excellent job.....the imagery is etched beautifully into the minds here.......I can see the kites dancing.......ALL STARS!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!....T xo  : )

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Neville

.. I quite agree, the precise poetic model is not always easy to adhere to .. in fact, so many get it wrong that I am in the process of formally copywriting two 'new' poetic forms listed below ..

1) The Faikhu
2) The Mokhu

A full definition of each will be posted here shortly to accompany examples of each ..

Thank you for your perusal of my little scribble and kind accompanying comment Tony T ............. stars & rockets etc are always greatly appreciated ..................... Neville :)
 

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Tony Taylor

Way cool NEVILLE!!....looking forward to it!!......T xo  : )

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Dusk Arising

Up. up into the windy skies.
Take me away from this cruel and battering torment of modern life and float me high on natures chariot wind that i may know again elemental joy and freedom.
The simplicity which holds such meaningful reward.
 

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Neville

Hold that thought a moment more, then publish it quick before someone else does ..................... cheers DA :)

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Neville

How very kind Linda, and much appreciated too .. thank you loads :)

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