Poem -
without you now.
I can't imagine feeling the warmth
Nor looking upon the sun the same
If you left me now
I would have myself to blame,
Maybe the stars around the moon
Would still shine within the night,
but how silent this world to be
without you now
just wouldn't feel right,
you've become the very thoughts
Within my mind within my heart
if you left me now
My would fall apart
If you love me now and forever
a beautiful world to start together
never having to question
If you'd disowne or depart
never falling to pieces
nor shatter my aching heart.
nardine Sanderson 05/07/2015.
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Thanks beautiful, I'm trying a few different types of love expression, the feelings That love create , being a sucker for the forever love, the heartache and all, I'll never understand love completely I Guess, but I'm contributing to an anthology of love, you will likely see many different emotions across my pages for a while, while I try to bury deep inside of the subject matter,
I do hope you are okay sweetie pie
Love and hugs your sis nardine xox.
Honorable Poetess Nardine,
This is a special romantic write, my applause, my love, my vote,
 Above all love is one of the most profound emotions known to human beings. For some, passionate relationships are the most meaningful element in their lives, providing a source of fulfillment outside of ourselves. But the ability to have a healthy, loving relationship is not all innate. Failed relationships happen, and most of us have to work consciously to master the situations and incidents in the daily life of each and every one, Poetess Nardine Sanderson has depicted this poem in a very romantic feel and inspirations, I would love to translate this to my mother tongue with her kind permission
I liked the below lines the most from the poem
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Very true dear Poetess Cherie, The very old Greeks called love as “the madness of the gods.” Modern psychologists define it as it the strong desire for arousing combination with another person. But what, actually, is love. It means so many different things to different people. Songwriters have described it, “Whenever you’re near, I hear a symphony.” Shakespeare said, “Love is blind and lovers cannot see.” Aristotle said, “Love is composed of a single soul inhabiting two bodies.”
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Dear brother Willy, wise quotes in each their own world's
Is love but a notion unless tasted, touched, swallowed Within the soul
~ love is the surface of
A palace, if not to enter
To seek , no glory can become
Of dust, nor diamonds
to slice the soul.
Hi Nardine,
Love has nothing to do with what you are expecting to get — only with what you are expecting to give — which is the whole thing.
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
You have completely misunderstood what I'm saying Willy, Don't put words in my mouth.
Hi Sanderson
I just mentioned this comment as a quote, this has nothing to do with personal life, I just happened to mention in a general way, you are taking as if this is in your case, I did not mean that. I am sorry, if my comments hurts you, my comments is on the LOVE CONCEPT only
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Maybe dear Willy try phrasing it in a general way next time,
the reference " your when speaking to me places me directly between the line's you are referring to.
I'd like to write without all this placement.
Never in all my life have I viewed love as a way to gain anything but the heart of another. Enough said.
To put it in plan English without the sugar coating
~ body is a palace ~ in order to enter a heart ~ the door must open
To become a part of one's soul that is worth more than any wealth.
Honorable Poetess Nardine Sanderson
I am so sorry for your above misunderstanding, I just think only the concept of love, and not a personal life or attitude, Believe me, I never meant to hurt anyone, I have specially posted a poem today to explain this
These are my poetic lines only, nothing to do with anybody's personal life in any manner. regret all kinds of misunderstandings,
Regards & Love
Willy
Look I've got no problem here, but posting a poem after the fact
Doesn't excuse the above issue, I'll gladly forget about it life is to short and precious for such indifference,
We do not think alike, remember that
Your thoughts are your own.
Thanks for your reply message, There is no issue at all from my side, thanks
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Hi Nardine,
I wish to take up the translation of the above verse, Seeking your kind permission
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
You have permission Willy xox
Honorable Poetess Nardine Sanderson,
I am much grateful for granting me your kind permission to translate your above poem to my own mother-tongue, Malayalam, this is my pleasure, I wish to take up all your other short poems for translation at COSMO pages with your kind permission, as I would do it as and when I get spare time, seeking again your permission for other poems too, it is a honor and privilege for all Malayalam speaking Keralites all over the world to read and love your fabulous poems dear Poetess Nardine Sanderson.
Again thanks for all your kind permissions and best supports
Regards & Respect to you
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI