Writen with desire
Mothered inspiration birthed from the seed of my soul
send my mind in to a frenzy with racing thoughts hard to gather and control
Words roll off my tongue with provocative pronunciation
climaxed by the inflection of each insertion of punctuation
ejaculated thoughts wrestled into pleasure provoking position are gone over back and forth and back and forth until the work is at a its greatest peak and ready for submission
New sensations flourish as visual aspects of the write begin to grow
the girth and length of your creation are now taking shape and beginning to show
fingers gripping pens
Pens gliding over paper
Paper once plain white showing the stain from its ink filled raper
A master piece of your own perfection
each pen stoke bringing it closer to desire
pace is quickening now finished with sparks of blazing fire
Just another write completed but written with such a hunger
It was meant to be innocent but may not be subtable for the younger
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Comments
Hi Rae Rae, this is not my usual type of poem but the way you have written it is nothing short of excellence.
Brilliant. Pinned.
- Syd
I am so happy that you comment I have never written anything like this its not true to my usual dark self loathing style lol but I felt such satisfaction when I completed it....you picked out one my favorite line that I almost didnt add I thought some might take offense then thought isnt art supposed to be controversial!!????
Smokin' Grooves RAE RAE!!....... once you start reading this there is NO turning back... it's VERY compelling...... with an undertone of sensuality to the play on words that you have going on with putting pen to paper!! ~
~ "Ejaculated thoughts wrestled into pleasure..."
Wow!!...... some awesome phrasing throughout!!......ALL STARS!!.... well done dear poet sister!!...... keep 'em comin'!!........LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo ?
Loving the encouragement and exspanding my comfort zone this is my first writing out of darkness and I think it is actually my favorite proudest piece?!
Rae Rae,
this is awesome! I love this! You go girl! Got my vote!
Terry so very glad i got you in my corner????
I'm not going anywhere. I want to see you grow. A little spark in my life! Thank you I feel blessed.
Rae Rae, soooo happy for you for your well deserved nomination! Very deserved for a great brilliant write....
Gratitude for all the encouragement found in my new poetic family....very humbled ?
Outstanding and very unique ????
love and regards ?
Thank you for taking time to comment ???
Congratulations on the nomination...beautifully done
Greatly appreciated
Hey rae rae this is beautifully well though and wtitten. Wow right away my mind got the point a trill of a read all to the end
This is out of your usual and just awesome sister poet?????
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You are right this is completely different from anything I have ever done and all the feed back has definitely encouraged me to continue exploring different ways to write thank you so much for reading and commenting ?