Poem -

You

You

You magnificent deity,
You honest soul,
You brought me to life.

You lit lights in my darknesses, a match to a mighty beacon.
You brought hope, where i thought all was lost.
You held me. In your arms. We laughed. Through the night. Hearts beating. Breath's racing.
You made me drowsy off the moment, wishing the tomorrow away.

You caressed and searched me, hands soft as thorns.
You took away what wasn't yours, never to be returned.
You hold me. By the arms. And just laugh. Scared for life. Heart beating. Breath racing.
You make me drowsy off something, i wish the moment away.

You deceitful bastard,
You unholy thief, 
You took my life from me.

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Dean Kuch

Whoa!
Talk about going from one end of the love/hate spectrum to the other, this scathing poetic tirade does just that, Brooke.
Thank God I'm not the one on the receiving end of this.
I pity the poor fool that is.
Powerful and well written.
~Dean Kuch

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Kate

Awesome poem with a wicked twist! 
I totally agree with Dean, very powerful and very well written. Welcome to cosmofunnel❤️X

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kay harris

Wonderfully written in a power of words. Welcome friend where we all can come together and share our love, our hurt what ever we may feel. Thank you for sharing a beautiful piece. 

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jaelyn bartusiak

truly empowering, drastic twist, i very much enjoyed the read ❤❤ nice write

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