Poem -

You Can Always Tell ..

I do love you,
she said ..
I love you too,
he replied ..
Well
okay then but,
I’m sure,
I love you
much more ..
Well
maybe just
lately,
you do he
sighed slow ..
And they
both roll over
and sleep
until morning ..
He facing
the window
and her,
facing the door ..

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Lorna

Hi Neville
Somtimes being with somone can be just as isolating as being alone.
thought provoking pieceĀ 
love
Lorna
X

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author
Neville

You are absolutely write Lorna .. Bless you xx

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author
Marion

I agree with Lorna here but the first part reminded me of our little one who always has to have the last...'love you more'
she literally ducks in the car so you can't see her to get the last one in lol. On the serious side a brilliant write as asual x

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author
Neville

Get outa here & make me smile BIG why don'tcha .. x

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