Poem -
You were there all along
My Mr forever
I love that we were childhood friends you know the real me.
We had to have life experience for this love to be.
We followed our own paths and went our own ways,
We've learnt a lot of lessons throughout our days.
32 years on and with so many stories to tell,
It was you that I turned to for help when I fell.
Being with you has made me remember who I am,
For the first time in ages I have found the real Sam.
I can't predict the future but I know what I want to see,
And that is to have a forever you and me.
I'm living the moment and enjoy what we have together,
And I'm hoping each day spent will turn into forever.
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Hi Sam. This is so romantic and sweet. To write about your true love and being together over the years is touching and from the heart. Thanks for sharing a beautiful love piece. Its flows eloquently with the rhyme. Hope you have read this to him! Enjoy your lovely moments together. Px💜
Thankyou... I wrote it a few months ago and he told me to publish it on here but I said I need to adjust it and make it better and he told me it's perfect as it is... So here it is. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. Thankyou for taking the time to comment. Much love xxx
Oh you're welcome! It is lovely piece as it is. Your husband/ partner was right 😁
I have checked your profile out... Wow.... What an amazing achievement to have your work published xxx
Thank you Sam. It's a huge achievement for me so I'm really pleased I did it.
Funny thing is I just updated that profile this afternoon!! Good to know people to look at it. Wasn't sure if anyone did!! Thanks for taking the time. Px💜
I always take time to look at people work especially when they have taken time to look at mine. I shall be purchasing your book after I have bought my kids birthday and Xmas pressies xxx
Oh wow Sam. I feel the same way and as fellow poets having others support is reassuring and welcoming.
My paperback version (which has my mindfulness art illustrations) will be back on Amazon in about a week or so.
Hope it inspires you to publish your writes x
I see we may be chatting more often 😁
Lovely to meet you Sam x
I wouldn't know where to begin to have my work published and there's so many talented writers out there I'm not sure my work is is at that level yet. Hopefully in the future I will achieve what you have... You must be so proud. Well done to you and yes hopefully we shall keep in touch xxx
Everyone has their own style and takes time to build up poetry, especially the ones you can select to get publish. So yes take your time and when you are ready it will happen. You must give yourself credit that u are good...some pieces are always going to be better than others and as we grow so does the writing so believe in yourself and set your own goal about what you want to achieve. There is no right or wrong. Keep writing and building that confidence. I am too. Actually being on cosmo from.this year helped my confidence and I realised I can still write and I'm a poet lol. Didnt think of myself before that.
night Sam x
Thankyou for that comment it's given me a confidence boost for sure. Who knows what the future holds for now I'm thankful that people like yourself are taking time to read my work xxx
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Caused me to reflect on friendships! Thanks for the prompting!...............Jim
Thankyou for taking the time to read my work. I'm glad you were inspired by it
Jim your comment has been playing on mind... I was wondering do you have a friend that you think maybe could be more than a friend? If you would rather not say I completely understand xxx