A You Without a Me
dont need to be reminded
There could be a you without a me
Since you walked out, the stars have not been shining
Still so hard to believe
Hard to believe theres a
you without a me
Not a us, so hard to see
Why you walked a way
Threw my heart back in my face
Theres so much I dont understand
About a you without a me
baby could you tell me
How youre gone
How you moved on
Wheres the scars
where your heart was torn apart,
or was it just me?
Am I the only one who lost everything
Cant sleep at night
It's like you clipped my wings.
I thought that I could fly
The whole time I was falling
I'm screaming out the hurt
Baby, can you hear me calling
It's still so hard to believe there could be a you without a me
Not a us, so hard to see
Why you walked away
Threw my heart back in my face
There's so much I'll never understand
About a you without a me
Don't ask me to look at you
I look away cause I dont wanna see
the reality
that youve moved on
Dont wanna see
a you without a me
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Comments
Powerful poetry, Danielle...felt the longing and heart break pulsing at the core of this well written verse...reads with terrific flow and intensity...very emotional with raw honesty...good poem
Thank you so much! It's always encouraging when people take the time to comment on anything I write, means a lot! :)
"I thought that I could fly
The whole time I was falling
I'm screaming out the hurt
Baby, can you hear me calling"
Very profound and inventive wording. I like the concept. Very good work...
Thank you so much! I'm so happy you enjoyed it :)
Hey Danielle!! This is another powerful piece of poetry! I could feel the sense of anguish through your words. I really love the structure of this write!! 5*s all the way!
Val ♥️
Thank you so much! So happy you enjoyed this piece and took the time to comment! :)
I don't believe I can say it any better than the people before me...so I'll just agree. It's very relatable and deep... the longing and emotion is so powerful... cheers xx
Obsessed with your writing! This is great writing, very deep
Thank you! :) Glad you enjoy it